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2012-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Good afternoon! Thank you. -S- what can you do with 1 million dollars? I want to my own house which is a two-story house and have a wide garden and high ceiling. It's hard to buy my ideal house but, It's enough to buy a house. Sometimes, I buy a lottery but, the result is losing ticket.. OR I imagine that I will spend the money like water because the moneu is originally no. 1. We (took) a walk every afternoon, we couldn't do without it. - would take 2. He is lucky, he (sleeps) anywhere. - will sleep 3. They (invariably arrived) at 4 p.m whether we liked it or not. - would invariably arrive 4. He (read) the paper before lunch, it was a habit with him. - wil read 5. What a lazy man ! He (sits) there for hours doing nothing. - will sit 6. We(inevitably spoke) about the same subjects. - would invitably speake 7. They (spend) hours playing cards because they love playing. - will spend 8. He was a great talker. He (spoke) for hours and hours. - would speak

강사 첨삭

Wow very good with your composition, [이름]. You did great with the homework that I gave you. You see, it is easy for you to follow grammar, right? I am impressed with your answer in the homework for today. I want to have a house too with a very wide garden, In that garden, I want to plant jasmine and white rose flowers. :) Thank you. I\'ll see you in class tomorrow! ~T. Leny Here are my corrections for you: Good afternoon! >>>CORRECT!Thank you.-S- >>>CORRECT!what can you do with 1 million dollars?I want to my own house which is a two-story house and have a wide garden and high ceiling. >>>I want to own a two-storey house with a wide garden and high ceiling.It\'s hard to buy my ideal house but, It\'s enough to buy a house.>>>It\'s hard to buy my ideal house especially if you do not have enough money to buy one. Sometimes, I buy a lottery>>>Sometimes, I buy a lottery ticket. but, the result is losing ticket..>>>But I I didn\'t have the luck always. ORI imagine that I will spend the money like water because the moneu is originally no.>>>I can imagine that I will spend the money like water because I did not earn that money myself.1. We (took) a walk every afternoon, we couldn\'t do without it.- would take>>>CORRECT! 2. He is lucky, he (sleeps) anywhere.- will sleep >>>CORRECT!3. They (invariably arrived) at 4 p.m whether we liked it or not. - would invariably arrive >>>CORRECT!4. He (read) the paper before lunch, it was a habit with him. - wil read >>>He would read the paper before lunch, it was a habit with him.5. What a lazy man ! He (sits) there for hours doing nothing.- will sit >>>CORRECT!6. We(inevitably spoke) about the same subjects. - would inevitably speak >>>CORRECT!7. They (spend) hours playing cards because they love playing.- will spend >>>CORRECT!8. He was a great talker. He (spoke) for hours and hours. - would speak >>>CORRECT!

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