Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon!
Thank you.
-S-
what can you do with 1 million dollars?
I want to my own house which is a two-story house and have a wide garden and high ceiling.
It's hard to buy my ideal house but, It's enough to buy a house.
Sometimes, I buy a lottery
but, the result is losing ticket..
OR
I imagine that I will spend the money like water because the moneu is originally no.
1. We (took) a walk every afternoon, we couldn't do without it.
- would take
2. He is lucky, he (sleeps) anywhere.
- will sleep
3. They (invariably arrived) at 4 p.m whether we liked it or not.
- would invariably arrive
4. He (read) the paper before lunch, it was a habit with him.
- wil read
5. What a lazy man ! He (sits) there for hours doing nothing.
- will sit
6. We(inevitably spoke) about the same subjects.
- would invitably speake
7. They (spend) hours playing cards because they love playing.
- will spend
8. He was a great talker. He (spoke) for hours and hours.
- would speak
강사 첨삭
Wow very good with your composition, [이름].
You did great with the homework that I gave you.
You see, it is easy for you to follow grammar, right?
I am impressed with your answer in the homework for today.
I want to have a house too with a very wide garden,
In that garden, I want to plant jasmine and white rose flowers. :)
Thank you.
I\'ll see you in class tomorrow!
~T. Leny
Here are my corrections for you:
Good afternoon!
>>>CORRECT!Thank you.-S-
>>>CORRECT!what can you do with 1 million dollars?I want to my own house which is a two-story house and have a wide garden and high ceiling.
>>>I want to own a two-storey house with a wide garden and high ceiling.It\'s hard to buy my ideal house but, It\'s enough to buy a house.>>>It\'s hard to buy my ideal house especially if you do not have enough money to buy one.
Sometimes, I buy a lottery>>>Sometimes, I buy a lottery ticket.
but, the result is losing ticket..>>>But I I didn\'t have the luck always.
ORI imagine that I will spend the money like water because the moneu is originally no.>>>I can imagine that I will spend the money like water because I did not earn that money myself.1. We (took) a walk every afternoon, we couldn\'t do without it.- would take>>>CORRECT!
2. He is lucky, he (sleeps) anywhere.- will sleep
>>>CORRECT!3. They (invariably arrived) at 4 p.m whether we liked it or not. - would invariably arrive
>>>CORRECT!4. He (read) the paper before lunch, it was a habit with him. - wil read
>>>He would read the paper before lunch, it was a habit with him.5. What a lazy man ! He (sits) there for hours doing nothing.- will sit
>>>CORRECT!6. We(inevitably spoke) about the same subjects. - would inevitably speak
>>>CORRECT!7. They (spend) hours playing cards because they love playing.- will spend
>>>CORRECT!8. He was a great talker. He (spoke) for hours and hours. - would speak
>>>CORRECT!
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