Homework

2012-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

C. I do it whenever I have time. When I'd like to say sorry to my friend and to express my gratitude or to celebrate Christmas day. A. I'd rather not say. If you know my age, you feel embarrassed because I'm older than you think. B. Sorry I have a business meeting tonight. But after 9pm I think I can go. How about that time? C. Yes, It's a ticket. C. I have no idea. Actually I moved to this city 3days before.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

I hope you are having a nice day today. You did a good job in your homework. Thank you for adding details in your answer. :) Here are the corrections I made for you. ^^

-Teacher Sheela-

C. I do it whenever I have time.
>> Correct!

When I\'d like to say sorry to my friend and to express my gratitude or to celebrate Christmas day.
>> I write to my friends when I\'d like to say sorry, to express my gratitude, and to greet them on Christmas Day.
A. I\'d rather not say.
>>Correct!
If you know my age, you feel embarrassed because I\'m older than you think.

>>If you will know my age, you would feel embarrassed because I\'m older than what you think I am.

B. Sorry I have a business meeting tonight. But after 9pm I think I can go. How about that time?
>>Correct!
C. Yes, It\'s a ticket.

>>Answer: A. I\'m afraid I can\'t find it.
C. I have no idea.

>>Answer: A. I like it a lot.

Actually I moved to this city 3days before.

>>Actually, I just moved to this city 3 days ago.

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