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학생이 쓴 원문
Essay: Can you tell me more about the meaning of the saying below?
"You don't choose your family. They are God's gift to you, as you are to them."
I grow up commonly with kind my family.
I don't imagine my marride-life.
but l married, and I would have mother of my husband and my son.
They are my fate of life when they were good or no good at conditions.
she has been dead for one years at yesterday.
she loved my son so much.
My family missed her.
I am not good mother,l will effort being good mom.
I ask my son sometimes "You will effort being goodman(son)"
l love my family.
강사 첨삭
Hello there! \"Family is not an important thing, it\'s everything.\" ~ Michael Fox
Not all people are given a wonderful family and you are lucky for having one. It is true that no matter what, our family is there to protect us and give us an unconditional love. Despite the hatred, problems, misunderstanding that sometimes occur, they are still there to give there 101% support. Happy Tuesday! ^^~T. Leny
Essay: Can you tell me more about the meaning of the saying below?\"You don\'t choose your family. They are God\'s gift to you, as you are to them.\"I grow up commonly with kind my family.
>>I grew up with a typical family.I don\'t imagine my marride-life.
>>I cannot imagine my married life.
>>OR: Before, I cannot imagine myself to be married.but l married, and I would have mother of my husband and my son.
>>But I am married now and I\'m leaving with my mother-in law and my son.
>>OR: I ma married now and I\'m leaving with my son and my husband\'s mother when she was still alive.They are my fate of life when they were good or no good at conditions.
>>They are my fate, whether they are in good condition or not.she has been dead for one years at yesterday.
>>Yesterday was her death anniversary.She loved my son so much.
>>Correct!My family missed her.>>Correct!I am not good mother,l will effort being good mom.
>>I am not a good mother but I will try harder to be a good mom.I ask my son sometimes \"You will effort being goodman(son)\">>I sometimes ask my son to become a good man and be a good son.l love my family.
>>Correct!
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