Homework

2012-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: WRITE A COMPOSITION ABOUT YOUR EXPECTATIONS THIS COMING WINTER. I don's like winter. Because, when winter I wear heavy clothes. That time , I stuffy. And winter is cold and dry. Dry weather is harmful to my skin. So, I don't like winter very much I like spring :D

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Hello there my [이름]^^ Thanks for sharing me your thoughts about winter. I hope that this coming winter you will not feel all of this. I suggest that you have to go to other countries like the Philippines during winter in Korea. I will talk you later my dear. I enjoyed reading your homework. T.Liza   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:WRITE A COMPOSITION ABOUT YOUR EXPECTATIONS THIS COMING WINTER.I don\'s like winter. >>I don\'t like winter.Because, when winter I wear heavy clothes. >>Because during winter, I wear heavy and thick clothes.That time , I stuffy.>> That time, I feel stuffy.And winter is cold and dry. >>In winter it is cold and dry.Dry weather is harmful to my skin.>>CorrectSo, I don\'t like winter very much >>Correct ( Just don\'t forget your punctuation mark^^) >>So, I don\'t like winter very much.I like spring :D >>Correct^^

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