Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi again!
Good job! Chuseok is indeed a big celebration in Korea. It is also one of the few times when families gather together. Your sentences are getting better. Keep it up! ^^
-Teacher Camille-
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
PARAGRAPH CONSTRUCTION
Why is Chuseok very important for most Korean families? Explain in 5 SENTENCES ONLY.
Chuseok is very important for most Korean families.
>>Correct!
Because Everyone in our family can to meet in Chuseok.
>>Because everyone in our family can meet during Chuseok.
Nowadays everyone in our family cannot to meet.
>>Nowadays, everyone in our family cannot meet each other.
It is very difficult.
>>Correct!
Also, Chuseok is very important holiday among holiday of korea.
>>Also, Chuseok is one of the most important holidays in Korea.
There are three public holiday.
>>There are only three public holidays in our country.
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