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People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I think people has various reasons for going to collede or something like that but I am gonna say two things about it.First of all, I'm certain that people want to develop their career to be employeed in a company. For example,my country has strong bias that people who had gone up to college is normal.So almost Koreans study hard to go up to college even sometimes without fundamental purpose. And second of all, I belive another reason for this is to learn how to get along with others well. As an example of this is that I've seen a lot of people who were so intrinsic at first year as freshmen, but as time goes they changed more outgoing. It will help people to be more team players if they work in a company,I thik.

Hi Sanghwa! Thanks for doing your homework. Well done! I like how you expressed your opinion here. Very well said.  Please review my corrections below and take note of the mistakes so that you don\'t make them next time. Lots of luck on the test! Have an awesome weekend! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~I think people has various reasons for going to collede or something like that but I am gonna say two things about it. >> I think people have various reasons for going to college or something like that, but I am gonna say two things about it. *Careful with the subject-verb agreement and spelling. ^^ First of all, I\'m certain that people want to develop their career to be employeed in a company. >> CORRECT *Spelling: employeed - employed For example, my country has strong bias that people who had gone up to college is normal. >> For example, in my country, there is a bias towards people who went to college. So almost Koreans study hard to go up to college even sometimes without fundamental purpose. >> So almost all Koreans study hard to go to a good college even though sometimes they don\'t really have a fundamental purpose.And second of all, I belive another reason for this is to learn how to get along with others well. >> CORRECT *Spelling: belive - believe As an example of this is that I\'ve seen a lot of people who were so intrinsic at first year as freshmen, but as time goes they changed more outgoing. >> I\'ve seen a lot of people who were introverts when they were freshmen, but as time goes by they became more outgoing. It will help people to be more team players if they work in a company,I thik. >> I think it will help if you are more of a team player in the company. OR >> Being a team player helps people work well in a company.