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2012-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1.oar 2.paws 3.reed 4.seen 5.sole 6.stare 7.hare 8.hear 9.muscle 10.piece Stress Currently my stress is about boyfriend. I determined to enjoy my life even though he likes me or not. So I focus on the present such a [이름]ging out with friends, enjoying my work, seeing a movie. The stress makes me feel down. Understanding my situations are the positive way.Also [이름]ting a counsellor is a good way. I heard that some people deal with stress in negative ways like a eating food a lot and taking drugs. I think the most cause of stress is lossing friends,job.

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'You may never know what results come of your action, but if you do nothing there will be no result.' ~ Mahatma Gandhi Good job on your answered homework Winnie. I had a great conversation with you today. You are so wonderful. Just keep that positivity in you. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: 1.oar >> Correct 2.paws >> Correct 3.reed >> Correct 4.seen >> Correct 5.sole >> Correct 6.stare >> Correct 7.hare >> Correct 8.hear >> Correct 9.muscle >> Correct 10.piece>> CorrectStress >> CorrectCurrently my stress is about boyfriend.>> Currently, my stress is about my boyfriend.I determined to enjoy my life even though he likes me or not.>> CorrectSo I focus on the present such a [이름]ging out with friends, enjoying my work, seeing a movie.>> So I focus more on the present such as [이름]hing out with friends, enjoying my work and seeing a movie.The stress makes me feel down.>> CorrectUnderstanding my situations are the positive way. >> Understanding my situation is a positive way of dealing with it. Also [이름]ting a counsellor is a good way.>> [이름]ting a counsellor is also a good way.I heard that some people deal with stress in negative ways like a eating food a lot and taking drugs.>> I heard that soem people deal with their stress in negative ways like eating a lot of food and taking drugs.I think the most cause of stress is lossing friends,job. >> I think the most common cause of stress is losing friends and your job.

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