homework

1. My biggest goal in life is a help for people who are orphan, help a girl or boy without parents who are died. They didn't be a gave love, it's too bad. If I were a success businessman, I'll can help more many them. I'll give them not only scholarship but amour. 2. Speaking English is basis to global businessman. Now, I'm studing English with you for speaking and others by myself. And I'm studing others that economy, leadership, management and reading books for my knowledge. I enjoy the study now but I'm very regrettable becuase when I was a student, I didn't enjoy it. 3. It's a fluent speaking English. 4. I have a greedy for fluent speaking English, Japanese, Duetch, Spanish and French. It's one of goal in my life. Nowadays, I have studied English and Japanese together since last [이름]. But my baby born two weeks ago so, I don't have enough time for study and I'm tiring thesedays. How should I spend my time more effective, it's my concern.

Hello there! ^^ Wow, nice homework! I am also hoping that you will become a succesful businessman so that you can help more orphans. They really need a good shelter, education and a person who can show them the real meaning of family,  genuine love and care. ^^ By the way, I saw a misused word in your answer in number one. Instead of using AMOUR, you may use LOVE. Amour means love affair and I know that\'s not what you meant. ^^ See you in our next class.

~T. Jenny

1. My biggest goal in life is a help for people who are orphan, help a girl or boy without parents who are died. They didn\'t be a gave love, it\'s too bad. If I were a success businessman, I\'ll can help more many them. I\'ll give them not only scholarship but amour.
>>My biggest goal in life is to help those orphan people most especially those who\'s parents are dead. They didn\'t experience much love, it\'s too bad! If I will become a successful businessman, I can help them. I\'ll give them not only scholarship but love.
2. Speaking English is basis to global businessman. Now, I\'m studing English with you for speaking and others by myself. And I\'m studing others that economy, leadership, management and reading books for my knowledge. I enjoy the study now but I\'m very regrettable becuase when I was a student, I didn\'t enjoy it.
>>Speaking English is a basis of becoming a global businessman. Now, I\'m studying English with you to be fluent. I am also studying about economy, leadership, management and reading to be knowledgeable. I am enjoying my studies now but I\'m very regretful because I didn\'t enjoy studying when I was a student.
3. It\'s a fluent speaking English.
>>To be fluent in speaking the English language.

4. I have a greedy for fluent speaking English, Japanese, Duetch, Spanish and French. It\'s one of goal in my life. Nowadays, I have studied English and Japanese together since last [이름]. But my baby born two weeks ago so, I don\'t have enough time for study and I\'m tiring thesedays. How should I spend my time more effective, it\'s my concern.

>>I am greedy of speaking fluently in different languages such as English, Japanese, Dutch,Spanish, and French.  It\'s one of my goals in life. Nowadays, I am learning English and Japanese at the same time since [이름]e. But my baby was born two weeks ago so I don\'t have enough time to study. It\'s really tiring these days. Now, my concern is on how to manage my time more efficiently.