HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
1.latest 2.old 3.many 4.less 5.younger
Internet
Of course,I use the internet to check my mails and to serch travel informations.
I use internet everyday for my researches and studies.
I often read funny stories and see nice pictures, find good informations on internet.
Internet can be used for education because it can help people find datas.
Generally I think playing game on internet is interesting. But it need to be controlled by parents.
강사 첨삭
'Look at a day when you are supremely satisfied at the end. it's not a day when you lounge around doing nothing; it's when you've had everything to do and you've done it.' ~ Margaret Thatcher
I noticed that your writing skill is quite improving Winnie so keep it up. Just be very mindful with your tenses and proper words that you will use. Take care and talk to you soon then. Have a blast this weekend.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
1.latest
>> Correct
2.old
>> B.big
3.many
>> Correct
4.less
>> Correct
5.younger>> CorrectInternet>> InternetOf course,I use the internet to check my mails and to serch travel informations.>> Of course, I use the internet to check my check mails and search for travel information.I use internet everyday for my researches and studies.>> CorrectI often read funny stories and see nice pictures, find good informations on internet.>> I often read funny stories, see nice pitures and find good information online.Internet can be used for education because it can help people find datas.>> CorrectGenerally I think playing game on internet is interesting.
>> Generally, I think playing game on internet is interesting.
But it need to be controlled by parents.
>> But it needs to be controlled by parents.
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