homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think there is still a possibility for North and South Korea to become one?
I think there is still a possibility for North and South Korean to become one.
But it will be very confused to people when North and South Korean become one.
Because North and South Korean too much long not be one.
So North and South korean have diffierence as languages.
Also North and South Korean have big difference as econmic.
German also was hard after become one.
My onpinion, it is not too happy if North and South Korean to become one.
강사 첨삭
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T.Ritchel
Here are my corrections for you:
Do you think there is still a possibility for North and South Korea to become one?I think there is still a possibility for North and South Korean to become one.
>>Correct!But it will be very confused to people when North and South Korean become one.
>>But it will be really confusing to people when North and South Korea will united as one.
OR >>The people will be really confused if North and South Korea will be united.Because North and South Korean too much long not be one.
>>Because it was already a long time that North and South Korea is united.So North and South korean have diffierence as languages.
>>North and South Korea have differences when it comes to language.Also North and South Korean have big difference as econmic.
>>North and South Korea have a big difference in terms of economy.German also was hard after become one.
>>Germany had a hard time to be united.My onpinion, it is not too happy if North and South Korean to become one.
>>In my opinion,people will not be really happy if North and South Korea will be united.
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