homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The man who looked very pale was sick.
2. He was sitting in the emergency room where was very crowded.
3. A nurse was nearby. He called to her. (I have no idea)
4. The nurse called a doctor who came quickly.
5. The doctor who looked very worried asked him to lie down.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
It was nice talking ti you today. I do hope that you are learning from our class. I do encourage you to read more books and focus on your sentence construction. Hope that you\'ll enjoy your weekend with your family.
Talk to you on Monday!!!
T. Jeny
1. The man who looked very pale was sick.
2. He was sitting in the emergency room where was very crowded.
>>He was sitting in the emergency room, which was very crowded.
3. A nurse was nearby. He called to her. (I have no idea)
>>He called to a nurse, who was nearby.
4. The nurse called a doctor who came quickly.
>>correct
5. The doctor who looked very worried asked him to lie down.
>>The doctor, who looked very worried, asked him to lie down.
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