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1.The most important thing is honest. President Lee, won the last presidential election, and his goverment offier can't find any honest and moral. Our democracy is now retreated by them. It's terrible. 2.Most of them maybe took a bribery by big company, it's not an unofficial of course. But We can expect their relationship according to their behabiors. They have too much benefits that two hunreds at least. For example, if they were a politician once, they can receive the pension over 60 until they die. They don't pay to use transportation like train and airplain during their politic activities. It's the tip of an iceberg. 3. Stronger the law for criminal is first on my list. I already told you before. Stronger the law to become politian is second on my list. Politians have been requested for honest, clear tax etc. But our politicians don't have those. We need to be more clear politicians.

Hello [이름].

Issues about politics is arguable, we do hope that we can find good politicians someday, that would make our world a better place to live in. 

Thank you for our class this morning, I do know that you an really achieve your goals in improving your English skills.

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T. Jeny

1.The most important thing is honest.

>>The most important thing is honesty.

>> Being honest is the most important thing.

President Lee, won the last presidential election, and his goverment offier can\'t find any honest and moral.

>>President Lee, won the last presidential election, but his government officer was not honest and immoral.

Our democracy is now retreated by them. It\'s terrible. 

>>Our democracy is being abused by them. It\'s terrible.

 2.Most of them maybe took a bribery by big company, it\'s not an unofficial of course.

>>Most of them unofficially bribed big companies.

But We can expect their relationship according to their behabiors.

>>But we can determine their attitudes by their behavior.

They have too much benefits that two hunreds at least. 

>>They receive a lot of benefits at about two hundred at least.

For example, if they were a politician once, they can receive the pension over 60 until they die.

>>For example, if they were once a politician, they can receive a pension over 60 until they die.

They don\'t pay to use transportation like train and airplain during their politic activities. It\'s the tip of an iceberg. 

>>They don\'t pay their fares in trains and airplanes during their political activities. It\'s the tip of an iceberg.

 3. Stronger the law for criminal is first on my list. 

>>To strengthen the law regarding criminal acts is the first thing on my list. Secondly,as I told you before.

I already told you before. Stronger the law to become politian is second on my list.

>> Secondly, as I told you before,the government should strengthen the law about the requirements of becoming a politician.

Politians have been requested for honest, clear tax etc. But our politicians don\'t have those.

>>Politicians have been requested for their honesty,fair tax etc. But unfortunately they are not.

We need to be more clear politicians.

>>We need better politicians.

>>We need effective politicians.