Homework

Hello Sheela! Happy Friday! I submitted my homework. 1. Do you mind my sitting here 2. I can hardly imagine Mike across the Atlantic Ocean all by himself 3. The boy pretend to writing an essay, but in fact he wrote nothing I'd like to tell you about my ring back tone story in this page. In summary, It is a love song. A girl feels that a boy intends getting close to her. But she scares she may be get hurt if she loves him a lot. I think she may have sad love experience. So she tells him with song "Let's get close more slowly, please wait until my mind open"

Hi there! Thank you for doing your homework. Please review the corrections I made on it. I hope you will have a great weekend! Happy Friday, too!  - Teacher Sheela- Hello Sheela! >>Correct!Happy Friday! >>Correct!I submitted my homework. >>I am submitting my homework.1. Do you mind my sitting here >>Correct! (Do you mind my sitting here?)2. I can hardly imagine Mike across the Atlantic Ocean all by himself >>I can hardly imagine Mike across the Atlantic Ocean sailing all by himself.3. The boy pretend to writing an essay, but in fact he wrote nothing >>The boy pretend to be writing an essay but in fact, he wrote nothing.I\'d like to tell you about my ring back tone story in this page. >>Correct!In summary, It is a love song. >>Correct!A girl feels that a boy intends getting close to her. >>Correct!But she scares she may be get hurt if she loves him a lot. >>But she is scared she might get hurt if she will love him a lot. I think she may have sad love experience. >>I think she may have a sad love experience.So she tells him with song \"Let\'s get close more slowly, please wait until my mind open\" >>So tells him in a song, \"Let\'s take it slow, please wait until my heart opens.\"