Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"Parents are the best teachers."
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with this opinion. I feel this way because, first of all, parents know more things than me as always, so they can give me an answer when in a difficult situation. For example, they have experienced a lot of things about life, so if I don't know how to make a decision,they could advise me well. They're a kind of alive books. Second of all, they support me with endless love so they are the best teachers than any other in the world. As an example, after I was born, I always feel their love in my everyday life. So I could also learn how to love each other. In this reasons, I think parents are actually the best teachers ever.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sanghwa! Thanks for sharing your thoughts about this topic. Impressive! I was moved by what you wrote here. I think you treasure your parents a lot and they were indeed the best teachers for you. I just made a few corrections with some of your sentences. Please review them. Good luck with your studies. Enjoy your day! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~I agree with this opinion.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I agree with this.
I feel this way because, first of all, parents know more things than me as always, so they can give me an answer when in a difficult situation.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I feel this way because, first of all, my parents know more things than I do, so they can give me an answer whenever I\'m in a difficult situation. - better
For example, they have experienced a lot of things about life, so if I don\'t know how to make a decision, they could advise me well.
>> CORRECT
They\'re a kind of alive books.
>> They\'re kind of like living books.
Second of all, they support me with endless love so they are the best teachers than any other in the world.
>> Secondly, they support me and give me endless love so they are the best teachers in the world.
OR >> Secondly, they support me and give me endless love so there no other teachers like them in the world.
As an example, after I was born, I always feel their love in my everyday life.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I\'ve always felt their love everyday ever since I was born. - better
So I could also learn how to love each other.
>> So I also learned how to love other people.
In this reasons, I think parents are actually the best teachers ever.
>> For these reasons, I think parents are the best teachers ever.
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