homework
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1. A gong is struck at 9:15 am to signal the beginning of a new work day at the New York Stock Market.
2. A bear market is a prolonged period of falling prices.
3. Investors gazing at the electronic billboard where bright green letters and numbers flow by on a black background.
4. A bull market is characterized by raising prices.
5. Only the initials of the companies and the price of their shares are flashed on the billboard.
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Hi there!
Thanks for doing your composition. You got 3 out of 5. Not bad in this homework. Keep up the good work and have time to study the mistakes. See you in class^^,
T.Jane
1. A gong is struck at 9:15 am to signal the beginning of a new work day at the New York Stock Market.>>CORRECT2. A bear market is a prolonged period of falling prices.>>CORRECT3. Investors gazing at the electronic billboard where bright green letters and numbers flow by on a black background.>> gaze4. A bull market is characterized by raising prices.>>rising5. Only the initials of the companies and the price of their shares are flashed on the billboard.
>>CORRECT
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