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2012-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

1. every 2.any 3.interesting 4.little 5.an I've been in a lot of weddings. It was my brother's weddig,cousin's wedding and friend's wedding in Seoul. I've seen a wedding of the prince william and the princes kate in London. It held at a special place. Some people like to hold at a church. I've bought a champagne and flowers for the bridal couple. Brides wear a white wedding dress and the broom wear a black suits. Also we have a traditional wedding clothes. The name is [이름]bok which has fantastic colors such a red, green, blue. In korea, the marriage between a man and woman represents the joining of two families rather t[이름] the joining of two individuals.

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Hello! T[이름]k you for doing your homework. You got all the answers correct for the homework. Below are the corrections I have made on your composition. If you have questions, just ask them in the class. See you .. T. Lara   1. every 2.any 3.interesting 4.little 5.an>> All your answers are correct.I\'ve been in a lot of weddings. >> Correct!It was my brother\'s weddig,cousin\'s wedding and friend\'s wedding in Seoul. >> I was at my brother\'s wedding, my cousin\'s wedding and a friend\'s wedding in Seoul.I\'ve seen a wedding of the prince william and the princes kate in London. >>I was at the wedding of Prince William and Princess Kate in London.It held at a special place. Some people like to hold at a church. >> It was held at a special place. Some people like to hold it at a church.I\'ve bought a champagne and flowers for the bridal couple.>> I\'ve bought champagne and flowers for the couple.Brides wear a white wedding dress and the broom wear a black suits.>>Brides wore white wedding dresses and the grooms wore black suits.Also we have a traditional wedding clothes. The name is [이름]bok which has fantastic colors such a red, green, blue.>>Also we have traditional wedding clothes. It is called [이름]bok which has fantastic colors such as red, green, and blue.In korea, the marriage between a man and woman represents the joining of two families rather t[이름] the joining of two individuals. >>Correct ( Korea= it should be written this way^^)

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