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2012-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1. high 2.older 3.clean 4.further 5.much University I studied at ChungAng University for 4 years. Currently I am studing English. I specialize in the [이름]dle of students who needs easy English. College education is important because without it we would have a hard time finding a job. A college degree says about me,it helps me to set a goal in my life.Forthermore it gives me good persons.

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'Striving for success without hard work is like trying to harvest where you haven't planted.' ~ David Bly I really do appreciate your hard work in improving your English skills Winnie. Just keep it up! Don\'t ever ever stop. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: 1. high >> Correct 2.older >> Correct 3.clean >> A. clear 4.further >> A. farther 5.much>> CorrectUniversity>> CorrectI studied at ChungAng University for 4 years.>> CorrectCurrently I am studing English.>> Currently, I am studying English.I specialize in the [이름]dle of students who needs easy English.>> I specialize in [이름]dling students who needs basic English.College education is important because without it we would have a hard time finding a job.>> CorrectA college degree says about me,it helps me to set a goal in my life. >> A college degree represents me, it helps me to set a goal in my life. Forthermore it gives me good persons. >> Furthermore, it helps me develop a good personality.  

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