HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
1.a 2.b 3.c 4.b 5.b 6.b
Culture
Nowdays I learn my own cultule from a famouse palace and on TV.
I think the traditional Korean house is interesting.It has beautiful lines and colors.
And foods are fantastic!! Such a Kimchi,Bulgogi,Pajun whic is similar with a pizza.
Also [이름]bok is so coloful.
The most important valuable in our country is spiritual. Because Koreans often pray and go to temples or church.
I think the unique forms and styles make their own cultures.
Recently, We has a lot of different cultures. Because many foreign people live in korea.
Yes, generally people should follow the rules when people live in another country.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, you did great today! You were able to express your ideas and opinions well. Culture is really significant in our life. Have a great night ahead!
T. Lara ^^
CultureNowdays I learn my own cultule from a famouse palace and on TV.>>> Nowdays, I learn my own culture from a famous palace and on TV.I think the traditional Korean house is interesting.
>>> Correct ^^
It has beautiful lines and colors.>>> CorrectAnd foods are fantastic!! Such a Kimchi,Bulgogi,Pajun whic is similar with a pizza.
>>> And the food, such as Kimchi, Bulgogi and Pajun which is similar with a pizza, are fantastic!Also [이름]bok is so coloful.>>> Correct but be careful of mispelled word.
>>> [이름]dbook also is so colorful.The most important valuable in our country is spiritual.
>>> The most important value in our country is spiritual.
Because Koreans often pray and go to temples or church.>>> CorrectI think the unique forms and styles make their own cultures.>>> I think the unique forms and styles make our own culture.Recently, We has a lot of different cultures.
>>> Recently, we had a lot of different cultures.
Because many foreign people live in korea.>>> Correct but be careful to always capitalize the first letter of Korea.
>>> Because many foreigners live in Korea.Yes, generally people should follow the rules when people live in another country.
>>> Generally, people should follow the rules of that country where they live.
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