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When I was young, my father who has his own business a lot of made money. But, in 1998, Korea was faced by IMF that cause most of people are faced very tough time that bad economic situations. My family was also very hard. I was adolescent at that time. I have want to many good and expensive produts like Polo and Nike etc. But I haven't. Since 2005, his business is growing until now. In basis of my experience, I understand a litte bit of poverty. I know it's not a extremly poverty, it's just the tip of an iceberg. Anyway, poverty afftected by adolescent who will have possible take somebody wallet. They cannot focus their study because they should be have a part-time job. They would have stress their life compared to rich parent's children. Poverty is not good.

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When I was young, my father who has his own business a lot of made money.

>>When I was young, my father owns a business and made a lot of money.

>>When I was young, my father earns a lot of income from his business.

But, in 1998, Korea was faced by IMF that cause most of people are faced very tough time that bad economic situations.

>>But in 1998, Korea faced bad economic situation because of IMF that\'s why many people suffered from it. 

My family was also very hard.

>>It was also difficult for my family.

I was adolescent at that time.

>>I was an adolescent at that time.

I have want to many good and expensive produts like Polo and Nike etc. But I haven\'t.

>>I want to have good and expensive products such as Polo, Nike etc. but unfortunately, I can\'t have any of those. 

Since 2005, his business is growing until now.

>>His business is in good condition right now since 2005.

In basis of my experience, I understand a litte bit of poverty.

>>In my experience, I can understand what is poverty.

I know it\'s not a extremly poverty, it\'s just the tip of an iceberg.

>>Not completely but it\'s just the tip of an iceberg.

Anyway, poverty afftected by adolescent who will have possible take somebody wallet.

>>Anyone who experience poverty , especially with adolescent, they can possibly take someone\'s wallet.

They cannot focus their study because they should be have a part-time job.

>>They cannot focus on their studies because they need to have a part-time job.

They would have stress their life compared to rich parent\'s children. Poverty is not good.

>>They will experience a lot of stress compared with children who are rich. Poverty is not good.