HomeWork

1. When we say someone is living in poverty, what does poverty mean? - Poverty means someone lives poor atmosphere. They cannot eat the food as much as they want, cannot drink water. 2. How do people escape poverty? - I think one of the way escape poverty is saving. They can earn money as much as they live. But, they should save some part of their earning. I wrote my essay too short. Sorry for that. But I don't know well about the poverty. If you want me to write the essay in Korean, I also was going to write very short and it was difficult. Have a nice weekend. Thank you.

Hi!Thank you so much for your composition. I admire you for creating good sentences.Keep up the good work! I hope that you will have a great weekend.I\'ll see you next week.Take Care. T.Jeny Here are my corrections for you: 1. When we say someone is living in poverty, what does poverty mean?- Poverty means someone lives poor atmosphere. >>Poverty means someone lives in a poor atmosphere.They cannot eat the food as much as they want, cannot drink water.>>Correct! >>They can\'t eat the food they want and they can\'t drink.2. How do people escape poverty?- I think one of the way escape poverty is saving. >>I think one of the ways to escape poverty is to save money. They can earn money as much as they live. >>They can earn money as much as they want to by doing their job well. But, they should save some part of their earning. >>Correct!I wrote my essay too short. >>correct >>I wrote my essay and it\'s too short. Sorry for that. But I don\'t know well about the poverty. >>Sorry for that. But I don\'t know a lot about poverty. If you want me to write the essay in Korean, I also was going to write very short and it was difficult. >>If you want me to write the essay in Korean,it will be also short and it\'s difficult.Have a nice weekend. Thank you. >>Correct!