homework

Hello there!

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When we say poverty, we talk about hunger, no money, no means of support or simply being poor. You have a very good point that poverty causes inequality. Poverty deprives the poor to enjoy life, to take advantage of privileges. However, it can be escaped. If the poor will never give up and will continue to strive to raise himself from the rags, then I am sure that he will and can become wealthy someday.

I hope this serves as an inspiration to all of us. Have a great weekend!

~Teacher Jeny

1.We have a proverb that All mighty is the dollar.

>> We have a proverb that goes \" Almighty is the dollar.\"

I\'ll explain what does mean as below.

>> I\'ll explain what it means.

>> OR The meaning of this is as follows.

Rich man has a power in our society by money.

>> A rich man has a power in our society by his money.

They don\'t have any strong penalty, if they could illegal things.

>> They don\'t get penalized whenever they do illegal actions.

>> OR They don\'t get severe penalties whenever the committed an illegal act.

>> They can employ popular lawyers who have strong connections with the prosecution.

Those basis will help that he don\'t receive strong penalty.

>> These bases will stop them from being penalized (or punished).

But, poor man cannot afford those.

>> But the poor man cannot afford these.

He will receive strong penalty even though he coud a slight offense.

>> He will be penalized even if he only commits a slight offense.

So, I guess poverty is unfair.

>> So, I guess life is unfair.

>> OR So I guess, poverty causes inequality.
2. We think if we do not have rich parents, we cannot escape.

>> We think that if we do not have rich parents, we cannot escape poverty.

It\'s like a destiny.

>> Correct!

If I have a parents who can make lots of money or power in society like doctor, lawyer and politician etc, I don\'t have any affraid in Korea.

>> If my parents earn a lot of money or if they have power in the society like doctors,

lawyyers and politicians, I don\'t have any fear in Korea.

I even can everything including the illegal.

>> I can even do everything including the illegal.

For example, when I did assult someone, I don\'t receive any strong penalty.

>> For example, when I did assault someone, I wouldn\'t get serious penalty.

>> For example, when I did assault someone, I wouldn\'t get penalized seriously.

My rich parents will help me.

>> Correct!
Anyway, excape the poverty is very hard.

>> Anyway, to escape poverty is very hard.

It\'s impossible by myself in Korea.

>> It\'s impossible to do it in Korea by myself.

It\'s so sadness.