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2012-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Fill in the blanks with-Who, Whom, Whose- to make the sentence correct. 1. (Who) wrote this book? 2. (Whom) are you going to recommend? 3. (Whose) dictionary is on the table? 4. It doesn't look like this is the right address. (Who) did you ask for directions? 5. We have two extra tickets for the concert. (Who) wants to go with us? Hi Jeny. Last weekend I had very hard time. So, This Monday, today, is too hard to work. I know you also tired because you start your work very early in the morning. I should do my best in my life, because There are a lot of people who works hard including you. Thank you for your effort. Have a good day!!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

What you\'re problem I do hope that you can work properly today even if you do have a problem. You can tell me about what you feel, I\'m all ears.... 

Thanks you for answering your homework you got 3/5 not bad but take a look at the necessary corrections that I\'ve made.

T. Jeny

Fill in the blanks with-Who, Whom, Whose- to make the sentence correct.

1. (Who) wrote this book?
>>correct
2. (Whom) are you going to recommend?
>>correct
3. (Whose) dictionary is on the table?
>>correct or Whom
4. It doesn\'t look like this is the right address. (Who) did you ask for directions?
>>Whom
5. We have two extra tickets for the concert. (Who) wants to go with us?
>>Whom

Hi Jeny.

>>Hi Jeny,

Last weekend I had very hard time.

>>Last weekend, I had a very hard time.

>>I had a hard time last weekend.

>>I had a difficult time last weekend.

So, This Monday, today, is too hard to work.

>>So today, it\'s hard to work.

>>So,it\'s difficult for me to work today.

I know you also tired because you start your work very early in the morning.

>>I know you are also tired because you start work early in the morning.

I should do my best in my life, because There are a lot of people who works hard including you.

>>I should do my best in life, because there are a lot of people who works hard like you.

Thank you for your effort. 

>>correct

Have a good day!!

>>correct

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