homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I did my homework but i didn`t save it so i am going to rewrite it ㅠㅠ
I have many friends but i`m now taking a year off from school and I have to study and prepare to apply for a job. i can`t meet them often.
I think i made a bestfriend when i was in highschool. His name is sun-woo. he looks like a korean actor ji-sub.
we`ve been made our friendship almost 9 years.
we used to meet at least once a week. but thesedays we are too busy to meet.
Usually we play basketball together. i like playing it together because he is good at playing basketball and also he has great skills.
we are going to meet when we have free time. I miss him
강사 첨삭
Hi! Thank you for your composition. Kindly check some of my corrections. But overall, you did a good job! Keep it up!
~~Kelly~~
I did my homework but i didn`t save it so i am going to rewrite it ㅠㅠ>> Correct.I have many friends but i`m now taking a year off from school and I have to study and prepare to apply for a job.
>> Correct.
i can`t meet them often.>> Correct.
>>OR:I can\'t meet them often.I think i made a bestfriend when i was in highschool.
>> Correct.
His name is sun-woo.
>> Correct.
>> OR: His name is Sun-woo.
he looks like a korean actor ji-sub.>> He looks like the korean actor Ji-sub.we`ve been made our friendship almost 9 years. >> We`ve been friends for almost 9 years. We used to meet at least once a week, but thesedays we are too busy to meet.>> Correct.Usually we play basketball together.
>> Correct.
i like playing it together because he is good at playing basketball and also he has great skills.>> I like playing with him because he has great skills in basketball.We are going to meet when we have free time.
>> Correct.
I miss him.
>> Correct.
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