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2012-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I did my homework but i didn`t save it so i am going to rewrite it ㅠㅠ I have many friends but i`m now taking a year off from school and I have to study and prepare to apply for a job. i can`t meet them often. I think i made a bestfriend when i was in highschool. His name is sun-woo. he looks like a korean actor ji-sub. we`ve been made our friendship almost 9 years. we used to meet at least once a week. but thesedays we are too busy to meet. Usually we play basketball together. i like playing it together because he is good at playing basketball and also he has great skills. we are going to meet when we have free time. I miss him

강사 첨삭

Hi! Thank you for your composition. Kindly check some of my corrections. But overall, you did a good job! Keep it up! ~~Kelly~~ I did my homework but i didn`t save it so i am going to rewrite it ㅠㅠ>> Correct.I have many friends but i`m now taking a year off from school and I have to study and prepare to apply for a job. >> Correct. i can`t meet them often.>> Correct. >>OR:I can\'t meet them often.I think i made a bestfriend when i was in highschool. >> Correct.  His name is sun-woo. >> Correct. >> OR: His name is Sun-woo. he looks like a korean actor ji-sub.>> He looks like the korean actor Ji-sub.we`ve been made our friendship almost 9 years. >> We`ve been friends for almost 9 years. We used to meet at least once a week, but thesedays we are too busy to meet.>> Correct.Usually we play basketball together. >> Correct. i like playing it together because he is good at playing basketball and also he has great skills.>> I like playing with him because he has great skills in basketball.We are going to meet when we have free time. >> Correct. I miss him. >> Correct.

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