HOMEWORK (20th June)

2013-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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Hi, isable Today is happy Friday. I like Friday because tommorow is off day, I'll rest at home with my family,so, i'm very happy. I have spical plan this weekend. I was still using a eleve years old car. so, I'll going to buy the my car. I want imported car. expamle. like BMW Mini but i'll going to buy korea car, because it's very expensive, ^^ Be happy and smile always! thank you [이름]. 1. (Do) you speak English? 2. If they (do) come, I will be very surprised. 3. (Does) he always behave like this? 4. (Do) they know that you're my sister? 5. I (don't) know how to cook. 6. (Does) your cats play with you? 7. You (do) understand, don't you? 8. Why (does) he always wear the same shirt? 9. (Does) Polish people eat a lot of meat? 10. My mother (doesn't) like to travel.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]! ^_^ You are doing good. However, you still have to practice a lot. :) I know you are smart so you will soon have big improvements in your English skill. I see that you\'re going to buy a new car. You will be able to have an imported car someday. You just have to work hard for it. Korean cars are pretty cool too so it doesn\'t matter. :) Enjoy your weekend! You take care  my dear! :) Always, T. Isabel. :) Here are my corrections for you. Hi, isable>>Hi Isabel,Today is happy Friday. I like Friday because tommorow is off day, >>I\'m happy because today is Friday. I like Fridays because tomorrow is my day off.I\'ll rest at home with my family,so, i\'m very happy. >>I am going to rest at home with my family so I\'m very happy.I have spical plan this weekend. >>I have a special plan for this weekend.I was still using a eleve years old car. so, I\'ll going to buy the my car. >>I am still using my eleven-year old car so I\'m going to buy a new one.I want imported car. expamle. like BMW Mini but i\'ll going to buy korea car, because it\'s very expensive, >>I want an imported car like a BMW Mini, but it\'s very expensive so I have to buy a Korean car for now.Be happy and smile always! >>CORRECT!thank you >>CORRECT! or>>Thank you.[이름]. >>[이름]1. (Do) you speak English? >>CORRECT2. If they (do) come, I will be very surprised. >>CORRECT 3. (Does) he always behave like this? >>CORRECT4. (Do) they know that you\'re my sister? >>CORRECT5. I (don\'t) know how to cook. >>CORRECT6. (Does) your cats play with you? >>Do your cats play with you?7. You (do) understand, don\'t you? >>CORRECT8. Why (does) he always wear the same shirt? >>CORRECT9. (Does) Polish people eat a lot of meat? >>Do Polish people eat a lot of meat?10. My mother (doesn\'t) like to travel. >>CORRECT

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