Homework 21
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Do you think there\'s life beyond the grave?
A. I believe there\'s no life beyond the grave and it is just a story that people made for the religion or superstition by our imagination. I think the end of breathing is the end of the life and we cannot use our brain to think after then. So it is important to make a good living in the real world. Even if there\'s life beyond the grave, it would be never the same with what we imagine. Because nobody knows how it\'s like as nobody can go through it and come back to real world.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thanks for catching up with your homework! ^ ^ I really appreciate it.
Different
kinds of people have varying opinions on this one. I can say that you
are more of a humanist. Humanists look towards scientific methods when
trying to understand how
the Universe works, and they reject the idea of the supernatural. They
don\'t believe in an afterlife and as a result, Humanists feel that we
should strive to find happiness in this life and help others to do the
same. Do you agree? ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I believe there\'s no life beyond the grave and it is just a story that
people made for the religion or superstition by our imagination.
>>CORRECT
>>Life beyond the grave is just a religious and a superstitious belief.
I think
the end of breathing is the end of the life and we cannot use our brain
to think after then.
>>I think the end of breathing means the end of life and our brains no longer have the ability to think after.
So it is important to make a good living in the
real world.
>>CORRECT
Even if there\'s life beyond the grave, it would be never the
same with what we imagine.
>>CORRECT (*it would never be...)
Because nobody knows how it\'s like as
nobody can go through it and come back to real world.
>>CORRECT (*...to the real world.)
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