homework 21
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What is the information superhighway and why is it important? Give some examples.
information superhighway is to give and take someone's information. Mostly it connect house, administrator and university using optical cable.
information superhighway can save a lot of cost from delivery any kind of things.
because the function give people for live time fastly.
Also it makes people to communicate widely, so they can know various information.
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What is the information superhighway and why is it important? Give some examples.information superhighway is to give and take someone\'s information.
>>correct
Mostly it connect house, administrator and university using optical cable.>>Mostly it connects house, administrator and university using optical cables.information superhighway can save a lot of cost from delivery any kind of things.
>>correct
because the function give people for live time fastly.>>Because the function it gives people is fast.Also it makes people to communicate widely, so they can know various information.
>>correct
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