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2012-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1.C 2.B 3.B 4.A 5.C 6.A Goverment In my country we have a good goverment and the laws that they implement are being by the people. In my country we vote for the leader. Lately the day of election is coming so i am thinking about candidates. I don't know exctly. But if a country has a strong military, it is good. The goverments should invest to universities, because not everyone can afford to get into a university.

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'Recipe for success: Study while others are sleeping; work while others are loafing; prepare while others are playing; and dream while others are wishing.' ~ William A. Ward I am so proud and happy with the development of your composition nowadays Winnie. Your way of writing is truly improving. I LIKE IT!!! Just keep it up. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: 1.C >> Correct 2.B >> A. She cuddled it. 3.B >> Correct 4.A >> Correct 5.C >> Correct 6.A>> CorrectGoverment>> GovernmentIn my country we have a good goverment and the laws that they implement are being by the people.>> In my country we have a good goverment and the laws that they implement are being obeyed by the peopleIn my country we vote for the leader.>> CorrectLately the day of election is coming so i am thinking about candidates.>> The day of election is coming so I am thinking about some candidates.I don\'t know exactly. >> Correct But if a country has a strong military, it is good.>> CorrectThe goverment should invest to universities, because not everyone can afford to get into a university. >> Correct

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