homework

1.Business is exchange their culture between countries. 2.Yes, I want to do. I know it's hard and difficult so I'm now studing English, marketing and manegement in order to have to my own business. When I think about it, it's very exciting. 3.Global recession is now more deeper that's the reason young people cannot find easy or to get their job. As a result, our goverment give the benefit for young people who will found thier own companies. So, my friends about three or four have already managed their own business. I'm not sure if I want to start business, whether easy or hard. But, in my opinion, it's better compared to other countries.

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- Teacher Jeny -

1.Business is exchange their culture between countries.

>> People from different countries share their cultures through business.
2.Yes, I want to do.

>> Yes, I want to do it.

I know it\'s hard and difficult so I\'m now studing English, marketing and manegement in order to have to my own business.

>> I know it\'s hard and difficult so I\'m now studying English, marketing and management in order to have to my own business.
When I think about it, it\'s very exciting.

>> It excites me whenever I think about it.
3.Global recession is now more deeper that\'s the reason young people cannot find easy or to get their job.

>> Global recession is now more deeper that\'s the reason why young people cannot find a job easily.

As a result, our goverment give the benefit for young people who will found thier own companies.

>> As a result, our government gives benefits for young people who put up their own companies.

So, my friends about three or four have already managed their own business.

>> Some of my friends have already managed their own business.

 I\'m not sure if I want to start business, whether easy or hard.

>> I\'m not sure if I want to start my own business because I\'m not sure if it would be easy or hard.

But, in my opinion, it\'s better compared to other countries.

>> Correct.