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2012-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hello. Jeny, Here is a homework for today! Have a great day! 1. The network of blood vessels connects every cell of the body,each of them dependent on blood. 2. After putting it off three times, we in the end managed to have a holiday in Greece. 3. In some languages there are very complicated rules about how to speak to older or more important people. 4. Blood delivers essential nutrients to the cells of the body, carts away waste products, fights infection and heals wounds. 5. Some tumors stop growing once they have reached a certain size, while others continue c) grow.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rosa, 
The purpose of good grammar is to ensure that what you write is correctly comprehended and is easy and enjoyable to read. Be able to correctly pronounce the words you would like to speak and have excellent spoken grammar.
T. Jeny

Hello. Jeny,

>>Hello Jeny,

Here is a homework for today!

>>Here is my homework for today!

Have a great day!
>>correct

1. The network of blood vessels connects every cell of the body,each of them dependent on blood.

>>correct

2. After putting it off three times, we in the end managed to have a holiday in Greece.

>>After putting it off three times, we finally managed to have a holiday in Greece.

3. In some languages there are very complicated rules about how to speak to older or more important people.

>>correct

4. Blood delivers essential nutrients to the cells of the body, carts away waste products, fights infection and heals wounds.

>>correct

5. Some tumors stop growing once they have reached a certain size, while others continue c) grow.

>>Some tumors stop growing once they have reached a certain size, while others continue to grow.


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