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Hello [이름],

The purpose of good grammar is to ensure that what you write is correctly comprehended and is easy and enjoyable to read. Be able to correctly pronounce the words you would like to speak and have excellent spoken grammar.

T.Jeny

History of terrorism is very long.

>>correct

>>History about terrorism is a long story.

It used to by people who want more effective results to using less money.

>>It is used by people who want effective results in using less money.

It\'s kind of way to imform their opinions from their enermies.

>>It \'s a kind of way to inform their opinion to their enemies .

>>It is their way to express their opinion to their enemies.

But, the worst problem is to kill the many citizens who don\'t have any relationships between terrorists.

>>But the worst problem is they kill many citizens, who don\'t have any relation to the terrorists.

>>But the worst problem is they kill many citizens, who are not related to the terrorists.

I know between USA and some Middle East Asia conutries are not good and hate each other.

>>I know between USA and some Middle East Asia countries, they don\'t have a good relationship with each other.

>>I know USA and some Middle East Asia countries don\'t have a good relationship with each other.

So, USA or their confederate counties were attacted sometimes.

>>So, USA and their confederate countries attacked sometimes. 

Luckly, Korea have not been attacted until now. 

>>Luckily, Korea has not been attacked until now.

4~5 years ago, our government prohibited to visit some countries like Iran, Syria and Egypt etc.

>>4-5 years ago, our government prohibited us to visit some countries like Iran, Syria and Egypt etc.

They announced those counties very dangerous to citizens.

>>They informed us that those countries are very dangerous.

>>They announced that those countries are very dangerous to citizens.

Now, we have to effort eradicate them for our peace.

>>Now, we have to eradicate them from our peace.

Remember, someday, our family and freinds can be victims.

>>Remember that maybe someday, our family and friends can be victims.