homework

2012-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Jeny, Here is my homework. Check up, please. 1. What is a good education? - Good education is that can help growing student's mind & body at the same time. 2.Is the level of education in your country good? - I think yes. Most of the high school student go to the university 3)What would you like to change about the education system of your country ? -I think spontaneous study is very important. So I'd like to change the education system to enhance the interest or curiosity of the students.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rosa,

Thank you for expressing your thoughts and opinion about education. I know that this is a good practice for you to compose correct sentences.

T. Jeny

Hello Jeny,

>>correct

Here is my homework.

>>correct

Check up, please.

>>Please, check.

1. What is a good education?

- Good education is that can help growing student\'s mind & body at the same time.

>>Good education can help grow student\'s mind and body.

2.Is the level of education in your country good?

- I think yes. Most of the high school student go to the university

>>I think the level of education in our country is good because almost all high school student go to the University.

3)What would you like to change about the education system of your country ?

-I think spontaneous study is very important. So I\'d like to change the education system to enhance the interest or curiosity of the students.

>>I think studying spontaneously is very important. I\'d like to change the educational system to enhance the interest or curiosity of the students.

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