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1. Teaching for help poor people and having humble mind is the best education I think. 2. I'm not sure because I'm not a professional this industry but I'm sure that private education market is more and more higher since last 5 years. It means our public education system is definitely fail. When our last president election, Mr.Lee promised us he must catch private education market. Because private education market is very expensive that means if you don't have enough money, your children don't join it. So, only rich people's children can join. He didn't want to it and emphasised if public education strong, everyone can study no mateer money. But, he is a liar. In other words, his goverment incites private eucation market. 3. I want to more strong our public education system. All people can have rights no matter gender, age, religion etc. I want to make a just society. If money is barrier, especially education, how can I express my feeling. It's very very sad.

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1. Teaching for help poor people and having humble mind is the best education I think.

>>I think teaching poor people and having a humble mind is the best education.
2. I\'m not sure because I\'m not a professional this industry but I\'m sure that private education market is more and more higher since last 5 years.

>>I\'m not sure because I\'m not a professional in this industry but I\'m sure that private education market is increasing 5 years ago.

It means our public education system is definitely fail.

>>It means that our public education is definitely failing.
When our last president election, Mr.Lee promised us he must catch private education market.

>>In our last presidential election, Mr. [Name] promised us that he will focus on private education market.

Because private education market is very expensive that means if you don\'t have enough money, your children don\'t join it.

>>Because private education market is very expensive which means that if you don\'t have enough money, your children can\'t go to school.

So, only rich people\'s children can join.

>>correct

He didn\'t want to it and emphasised if public education strong, everyone can study no mateer money.

>>He doesn\'t want to emphasize in improving public education, so that everyone can study even if they don\'t have enough money.

But, he is a liar. In other words, his goverment incites private eucation market.

>>But he is a liar. In other words, his government incites private education market.
3. I want to more strong our public education system.

>>I want a stronger public educational system.

All people can have rights no matter gender, age, religion etc.

>>Everyone have rights no matter what gender, age, religion etc.

I want to make a just society.

>>correct

If money is barrier, especially education, how can I express my feeling.

>>If money is a barrier in terms of education, how can I express my feelings.

 It\'s very very sad.

>>correct

OR>>It\'s disappointing.

>>It\'s very sad.