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2021-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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1. How can you help homeless people in your country? I can give money to help them. 2. What benefits do you get from using your conputer or laptop? I can have online classes and I can prepare a document with powerpoint, hangul (similar with MS word), Excel. 3. How did you develop your skills in using the computer? I made the speed that I find and insert shapes in powerpoint with preparation of powerpoint.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Great work today!

Until the next one!

See you in class on Monday! :)

~Teacher Sheila

I can give money to help them.
>>CORRECT

I can have online classes and I can prepare a document with powerpoint, hangul (similar with MS word), Excel.
>>I can have online classes and I can prepare PowerPoint, Hangul, and Excel.

I made the speed that I find and insert shapes in powerpoint with preparation of powerpoint.

>>I have developed my speed in finding and inserting shapes on the PowerPoint.

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