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It is hard to make students keep quiet. They love to talk each other so much in calss. I can understand them but they need to calm down in my class.
I like to teach basic English. In addition, I like my sir and another teacher.
The company that I have been working for before taught me how to control students.
People who are in other department are my close friends.They hold at a board so we can [이름]t one time per a month for one hour.
I wish to work with people who are open minded who would wish to share good ideas and resources.
Basically, the management should think well-being,transyparancy and their own values.
강사 첨삭
\'You may never know what results come of your action, but if you do nothing there will be no result.\' ~ Mahatma Gandhi. I hope that you wont stop on giving good results in terms of your English skills Winnie. You always write compositions with sense. Keep it up!! Take care and talk to you soon.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
It is hard to make students keep quiet.
>> Correct
They love to talk each other so much in calss.
>> They love talking with one another a lot in the class.
I can understand them but they need to calm down in my class.>> CorrectI like to teach basic English.
>> Correct
In addition, I like my sir and another teacher.>> In addition, I like my boss and another teacher.The company that I have been working for before taught me how to control students.>> CorrectPeople who are in other department are my close friends.
>> Correct
They hold at a board so we can [이름]t one time per a month for one hour.>> They post our one hour monthly [이름]ting on the board.I wish to work with people who are open minded who would wish to share good ideas and resources.>> CorrectBasically, the management should think well-being,transyparancy and their own values.
>> Basically, the management should think for their teachers\' well-being, transparency and values.
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