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2012-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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I usually use my diary. It helps me to keep a day regular. The last day of month,I always plan for my next days of month. When I keep a diary,I am so happy. Having a project may have an amount of time but you need to focus on the project. Yes,I've done a cost-benefit analysis. When I had a bussiness for students. For me, I find someone who help me. I gave him or her small gifts and happiness. First, I make a arrangement for task, and I think it easy.I sometimes ask who have already done.

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I usually use my diary. >> Correct >> or I usually write in my diary. It helps me to keep a day regular. >> It helps me keep my regular whereabouts/activities each day. The last day of month,I always plan for my next days of month. >> It\'s the last day of the month. I always plan the following days of a month. When I keep a diary,I am so happy.>> CorrectHaving a project may have an amount of time but you need to focus on the project.>> Having a project needs an ample amount of time and you need to focus in it.Yes,I\'ve done a cost-benefit analysis. When I had a bussiness for students. >> CorrectFor me, I find someone who help me. >> For me, I would find someone who could help me. I gave him or her small gifts and happiness.>> I will give him/her simple gifts and share  happiness.For me, I make a arrangement for task, and I think it easy. >> I will make an arrangement for a task that I think would be easy. I sometimes ask who have already done. >> I sometimes ask people who already finished their work.

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