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2010-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Yesterday, my father does not have many thing to do. So, he went driving to the suburb with my mom and me. Actually it is usual thing to do for my family. The funny thing is I was really tired and sleepy yesterday. So I slept almost all times during his driving. I could not see the beautiful view,,, After driving, we went chinese restaurant. We ordered Kong-Guk-soo(it is kind of noodle which is made of bean) and Tangsuyuk(it is kind of pork),JJajangmyun(it is typical chinese noodle). I was really happy to eat Kongguksoo. Generally I eat half of the noodle. But I ate all of the noodle yesterday. That is why I don't want to eat Kongguksoo anymore. I am already sick and tired of it. Anyway, it was great day with my parents!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I'm happy to receive your composition. I admire you for your effort in doing your homework. You made me hungry today. HAHAHA. I'm now craving for Chinese food. see you tomorrow! Love, Verna   Yesterday, my father does not have many thing to do. So, he went driving to the suburb with my mom and me. >>Yesterday, my father didn't have many things to do so, he went driving to the suburb with me and my mom .Actually it is usual thing to do for my family. >>Actually it is a usual thing to do in my family. The funny thing is I was really tired and sleepy yesterday. >>The funny thing was I was really tired and sleepy yesterday.So I slept almost all times during his driving. I could not see the beautiful view,,, >>So I slept almost all the time during his driving. I didn't see the beautiful view,,,After driving, we went chinese restaurant. >> After driving we went to Chinese restaurant. We ordered Kong-Guk-soo(it is kind of noodle which is made of bean) and Tangsuyuk(it is kind of pork),JJajangmyun(it is typical chinese noodle). >>We ordered Kong-Guk-soo(it is a kind of noodle which is made of bean) and Tangsuyuk(it is a kind of pork),JJajangmyun(it is a typical chinese noodle).I was really happy to eat Kongguksoo. >> Correct^^ Generally I eat half of the noodle. But I ate all of the noodle yesterday. That is why I don't want to eat Kongguksoo anymore. I am already sick and tired of it. >>Mostly, I eat half of the noodle but yesterday I ate all of the noodles. That is why I don't want to eat Kongguksoo anymore. I am already sick and tired of it.Anyway, it was great day with my parents! >>Anyway, I had a great time with my parents.

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