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T. Jeny

When I was middle school student, I smoke first time with my friends.

>>When I was a middle school student, I smoked with my friends for the first time.

At that time, I was very dizzy and nauseous that it\'s a bad feeling to me.

>>at that time, I was very dizzy and nauseous which was a bad feeling for me. 

After that, I didn\'t try to smoke any more so I\'m not a smoker. 

>>After that, I didn\'t smoke anymore so I\'m not a smoker.

Everyone knows that smoking is not a good for health but, most of smokers cannot quit it because it contains drug.

>>Everyone knows that smoking is not good for the health but most smokers cannot quit because it contains nicotine.

It causes many diseases especially,cancer.

>>It causes many diseases especially cancer.

People who have cancer regret to smoke their lifelong and they recommend smoker to quit.

>>People who have cancer regret that they smoked and they will recommend smokers to quit.

But, it doesn\'t matter smoker who don\'t have any disease until now. 

>>But it doesn\'t matter for smoker, who doesn\'t have any disease.

I know some countries too much charge to cigarettes price.

>>I know some countries charge too much for a pack of cigarettes.

One pack of cigarettes maybe 8USD in Australia.

>>correct

Korea is now only 2.5USD that is so lower price. 

>>In Korea a pack cost 2.5 USD only.

Our government has planed to raise the price but, many smokers opposite. 

>>Our government has a plan to raise the prices of cigarettes but many smokers oppose.

I want to tell the smokers that please try to quit then, your family is more happy.

>>I want to tell the smokers that they need to quit so that their family will be happy.