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2012-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Although the weather was bad, we enjoyed our trip. 2. The children slept well spite of the noise. 3. Although earning a low salary, Linda gave money to her parents. 4. John rarely sees Paul although they live in the same town. 5. Tom went to work spite of not feeling very well.

강사 첨삭

Hello there.^^
You simply missed an item here.
You can go over it, if you have time, so if you encounter something like this, you will no longer be confused.
Smile!
_T.Camille^^
1. Although the weather was bad, we enjoyed our trip.
>> Correct
2. The children slept well spite of the noise.
>> Correct
OR >> The children slept well in spite of the noise.
3. Although earning a low salary, Linda gave money to her parents.
>> In spite of earning a low salary, Linda gave money to her parents.
4. John rarely sees Paul although they live in the same town.
>> Correct
5. Tom went to work spite of not feeling very well.
>> Correct
OR >> Tom went to work in spite of not feeling very well.

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