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Hello [이름], 

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T. Jeny

1. Many people who live in all over the world are using now like Twitter and Facebook but, I don\'t use those.

>>Many people who live all over the world are using Twitter and Facebook now, but I don\'t use those.

2. Easier communication between people who don\'t have related to not at all before.

>>We can have an easier communication between people we don\'t know.

For example, One element school student, maybe he is a boy, informed by his twitter to Seoul mayor who Mr.Park to uncomfortable and dangerous street condition near his house.

>>For example, an elementary boy school student, informed Seoul\'s mayor, Mr. [Name], about the uncomfortable and dangerous street condition near his house, by twitter.

Boy wants to change street condition for safe.

>>The boy wants to change street condition for safety.

A few days later, Mr.Park informed boy by his twitter that street is now clear. 

>>A few days later, Mr. [Name] informed the boy that the street is now clear by twitter.

Boy was surprised because even though he informed it but, he never didn\'t expect actual.

>>The boy was surprised because he didn\'t expected that his request will be granted.

If there is no twitter, how can communicate between boy and Seoul mayor?

>>If there is no twitter, how can communication between the boy and  the Seoul\'s mayor possible?

3. To manage SNS, we should use too much time.

>>correct

OR>>To manage SNS, we need a lot of time.

We have to continuosly update, visit friend\'s SNS and comment diary or pictures.

>>We have to continuously update, visit friend\'s SNS and comment diary and pictures.

I think sometimes it\'s so tiresome when you are sick or prepare to test.

>>I think sometimes, it\'s so tiresome especially if you are sick or preparing for a test.

Another bad thing is no private life.

>>Another bad thing is that you don\'t have any privacy.