Homework (217)
학생이 쓴 원문
- What simple thing can you do as a student to make this world a better place to live in? Why?
I can join campaign because I learned campaign could make this world a better place to live in when I was in the 4th grade and Join that is not hard.
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Hello there [이름]! You did great at making a long sentence in this homework.
Until the next one!
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~Teacher Sheila
I can join campaign because I learned campaign could make this world a better place to live in when I was in the 4th grade and Join that is not hard.
>>I can join campaigns because I learned that campaigns could make this world a better place to live in when I was in the 4th grade. Joining is not that hard.
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