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2012-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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Hi Kate As I told you this evening, I finally came home. It's past 12 already. I'm a bit fatigue but feel great. I feel a sense of satisfaction for having worked so hard at times. (Am I a workaholic? kk) Kate, I have a suggestion for our class. I know that we have a textbook for free talking class. Although it's too short to study on every chapter of that book in ten minutes, I think we can share one or two expressions everyday. Many drops can make a real shower~ right? I'd be grateful if you help me master useful vocabularies and expressions :) Composition: Are there any foods that you wouldn't eat as a child that you eat now? Tell me more about it. I used to avoid eating cooked carrots. Before I knew it, I couldn't eat steamed carrots but raw ones. Theses days I'm not that picky about carrots because eating them is good for my eyesight. (I just swallow them kk)

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Hello there! It was fun reading your composition. Thank you for giving your suggestion on what we should focus in class. I will consider your opinion. Have a great day ahead! ~Teacher Kate ~   Hi Kate>>Correct.As I told you this evening, I finally came home. >>As I told you this evening, I finally arrived home. It\'s past 12 already. >>Correct.I\'m a bit fatigue but feel great. >>I\'m a bit exhasuted but I feel great. I feel a sense of satisfaction for having worked so hard at times. (Am I a workaholic? kk)>>Correct.Kate, I have a suggestion for our class. >>Correct.I know that we have a textbook for free talking class.>>Correct.Although it\'s too short to study on every chapter of that book in ten minutes, I think we can share one or two expressions everyday. >>Correct.Many drops can make a real shower~ right?>>Correct.I\'d be grateful if you help me master useful vocabularies and expressions :)>>Correct. Composition: Are there any foods that you wouldn\'t eat as a child that you eat now? Tell me more about it.I used to avoid eating cooked carrots. >>Correct. Before I knew it, I couldn\'t eat steamed carrots but raw ones. >>Before, I couldn\'t eat steamed carrots. I only eat the raw ones.Theses days I\'m not that picky about carrots because eating them is good for my eyesight. (I just swallow them kk) >>Correct. (Spelling check: theses - these)

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