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(Fashion) For me, fashion means that it makes me refresh and reprents me. I love creativity.Ilike to paint so one of my hobbies is to give my friends my paintings. I like Korean fashion designers. They tried moden and gloval styles. I belive that a quality article of clothing is through the creative thoughts,people's comfortable and roles. In the moden fashion scean, it sees that most Korean dresses shows range from casual to formal occasions.

'If we did all the things we were capable of doing, we would literally astound ourselves.' ~ Thomas Edison I also love fashion SO MUCH! And I admire Korean clothes SO MUCH! I feel really comfortable and elegant when I\'m wearing some Korean clothes. I bought some Korean clothes online but its sooo expensive. :( Lets talk more about this on our nextr class Winnie. Take care. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: (Fashion)>> CorrectFor me, fashion means that it makes me refresh and reprents me.>> For me, fashion represents my personality and makes me feel refreshed.I love creativity.Ilike to paint so one of my hobbies is to give my friends my paintings.>> I love create hobby like painting so I give my friends some of my paintings.I like Korean fashion designers. >> Correct They tried moden and global styles.>> They show modern and global styles.I belive that a quality article of clothing is through the creative thoughts,people\'s comfortable and roles.>> I believe that the quality of clothing can be done through the creative mind of peoples\' comfort and status.In the moden fashion scean, it sees that most Korean dresses shows range from casual to formal occasions. >> In the moden fashion scenes, it seems that most Korean dresses show a variety of designs from casual to formal occasions.