Homework

2012-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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T.Sheela HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Decided whether to use the definite article >the< or not. If you do not need the article >the<, type an x. Hi John, I arrived in __1.the__USA last Monday. We left__2__Rome, flew over __3.the__Alps and made a quick stop in __4___London. There we went shopping in __5.the__Harrods, visited __6__Tower and enjoyed a [이름]ny afternoon in __7.the__Hyde Park. On the__8__following day we left for __9__New York. __10.the__time on board wasn't boring as there were two films to watch on __11__monitor. __12___people on __13__plane were all __14__Italian. Before we landed at __15.the__JFK airport, we saw __16__Statue of Liberty, __17.the__Ellis Island and __18.the__Empire State Building. __19__hotel I stayed in was on __20__corner of __21__42nd Street and __22__5th Avenue. I don't like __23__hotels very much, but I didn't have __24__time to rent an__25__apartment.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thanks for your homework. Go over my corrections please for your practice. Enjoy the rest of the day. See you in class. ~T. Sheela HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Decided whether to use the definite article >the< or not. If you do not need the article >the<, type an x. Hi John,>>Correct.I arrived in __1.the__USA last Monday. >>Correct. We left__2__Rome, flew over __3.the__Alps and made a quick stop in __4___London. >>Correct. There we went shopping in __5.the__Harrods,  >>They went shopping in Harrods.  visited __6__Tower and enjoyed a [이름]ny afternoon in __7.the__Hyde Park. >> visited the Tower and enjoyed a [이름]ny afternoon in Hyde Park. On the__8__following day we left for __9__New York. __ >>Correct. 10.the__time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on __11__monitor. >>The time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on the monitor. __12___people on __13__plane were all __14__Italian. >> The people on the plane were all Italian. Before we landed at __15.the__JFK airport, we saw __16__Statue of Liberty, __17. the__Ellis Island and __18.the__Empire State Building. >> Before we landed at JFK airport,we saw the Statue of Liberty, Ellis Island and the Empire State Building.  __19__hotel I stayed in was on __20__corner of __21__42nd Street and __22__5th Avenue. >>The hotel I stayed in was on the corner of 42nd Street and 5th Avenue. I don\'t like __23__hotels very much, but I didn\'t have __24__time to rent an__25__apartment. >>Correct.

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