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2012-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1. Almost 2.Most of 3.almost all 4.most of 5.most of Movie I love watching a romance-comedy movie.Because I can learn love and it give me a smile. My favorite actor is jo in sung who is [이름]some and tall. Most of all, I like his actings. His acting is simple and sometimes looks like a fool. But his acting is so impressive to me. The advantages are having common senses and sharing our memories with friends. No, I don't like it.It is sometimes dangerous for children. I learned a history about U.K through 'The Other Boleyn Girl'.

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'The most painful thing to experience is not defeat but regret' ~ Leo Bascaglia Good job on this composition Winnie. Just be very careful on how you finish a certain sentence. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections: 1. Almost >> Almos all people in the world want to lead a better life. 2.Most of >> Almost all junior high students in Japan and Korea have to study hard to pass high school examinations. 3.almost all >> I like summer most of the time, but August is really too hot! 4.most of >> I almost had a bad accident yesterday. I have to drive more carefully. 5.most of>> The cat almost scratched my leg, but I shooed it away.Movie>> CorrectI love watching a romance-comedy movie.Because I can learn love and it give me a smile.>> I love watching a romantic-comedy movie because I can learn more about love and it gives smile on my face.My favorite actor is jo in sung who is [이름]some and tall. Most of all, I like his actings.>> My favorite actor is Jo In Sung who is tall, [이름]dsome and most of all I like his acting.His acting is simple and sometimes looks like a fool. >> Correct But his acting is so impressive to me.>> CorrectThe advantages are having common senses and sharing our memories with friends.>> CorrectNo, I don\'t like it.It is sometimes dangerous for children.>> CorrectI learned a history about U.K through \'The Other Boleyn Girl\'. >> Correct

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