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학생이 쓴 원문
1. Almost 2.Most of 3.almost all 4.most of 5.most of
Movie
I love watching a romance-comedy movie.Because I can learn love and it give me a smile.
My favorite actor is jo in sung who is [이름]some and tall. Most of all, I like his actings.
His acting is simple and sometimes looks like a fool. But his acting is so impressive to me.
The advantages are having common senses and sharing our memories with friends.
No, I don't like it.It is sometimes dangerous for children.
I learned a history about U.K through 'The Other Boleyn Girl'.
강사 첨삭
'The most painful thing to experience is not defeat but regret' ~ Leo Bascaglia
Good job on this composition Winnie. Just be very careful on how you finish a certain sentence. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections:
1. Almost
>> Almos all people in the world want to lead a better life.
2.Most of
>> Almost all junior high students in Japan and Korea have to study hard to pass high school examinations.
3.almost all
>> I like summer most of the time, but August is really too hot!
4.most of
>> I almost had a bad accident yesterday. I have to drive more carefully.
5.most of>> The cat almost scratched my leg, but I shooed it away.Movie>> CorrectI love watching a romance-comedy movie.Because I can learn love and it give me a smile.>> I love watching a romantic-comedy movie because I can learn more about love and it gives smile on my face.My favorite actor is jo in sung who is [이름]some and tall. Most of all, I like his actings.>> My favorite actor is Jo In Sung who is tall, [이름]dsome and most of all I like his acting.His acting is simple and sometimes looks like a fool.
>> Correct
But his acting is so impressive to me.>> CorrectThe advantages are having common senses and sharing our memories with friends.>> CorrectNo, I don\'t like it.It is sometimes dangerous for children.>> CorrectI learned a history about U.K through \'The Other Boleyn Girl\'.
>> Correct
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