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Technology Our family have rice cooker, a fridge, a microwave, a stove, smart phones, a pc,a digital TV,digital cameras etc. I love gadgets. I have a smart phone which made from LG. It is useful to communicate with my friends and family. Technology is the making,craft,systems or methods of organization in order to solve the problems. Yes,technology makes our lives more comfortable.I think technology today is connection between people and people.

I am very happy for the way you wrote your composition today. I really do appreciate your effort!! I hope that you will always strive harder for you to improve your English skill. Take care! See you tomorrow!! Teacher Lara >>> AND OH BY THE WAY WINNIE. FOR YOU TO GET POWER ENGLISH ADDRESS SO YOU COULD SEND YOUR PAINTING TO ME, JUST TALK TO ONE OF MY MANAGERS AND THEY WILL TELL YOU THEIR EXACT ADDRESS IN SEOUL. T[이름]K YOU. Here are my corrections for you: Technology>> CorrectOur family have rice cooker, a fridge, a microwave, a stove, smart phones, a pc,a digital TV,digital cameras etc.>> CorrectI love gadgets. I have a smart phone which made from LG. >> Correct It is useful to communicate with my friends and family.>> CorrectTechnology is the making,craft,systems or methods of organization in order to solve the problems.>> Teachnology is the makingof systems and methods of organizations in oredr to solve the problems.Yes, technology makes our lives more comfortable. >> Correct I think technology today is connection between people and people. >> I think technology today connects people to people. >> I think technology today builds a strong connection from people to people.