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2012-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I'm always trying to the smile and optimistic. 2. Nowadays, my baby gives me happy even though she cannot talk or walk. She just can sleep; actually she sleeps most ot her time, drinking milk, looking at me and sometimes smile. But, it's so lovely. 3. Dishonesty and lie. I think between people who friends, co-workers, parents etc need to build a trust but those things disrupt and try to have a doubt each other. 4. Whoever have must been affected by people to whom have relationship. So, the most important thing is what kind of people you will meet. If you have a good frineds, you maybe resemble their personality, behavior and thought. But if you have in opposit friends, you will be resemble them. We have a proverb related to situation. He who touches pitch shll be defiled therewith.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for this composition. I agree with you that it is important to consider the types of people you meet along the way. Good job! teacher JENY 1. I\'m always trying to the smile and optimistic. >> I\'m always trying to smile and be optimistic.2. Nowadays, my baby gives me happy even though she cannot talk or walk.>> Nowadays, my baby gives me happiness even though she can\'t talk or walk yet. She just can sleep; actually she sleeps most ot her time, drinking milk, looking at me and sometimes smile. But, it\'s so lovely. >> She sleeps most of the time, drinks milk looks at me and sometimes smile. She is so lovely.3. Dishonesty and lie. I think between people who friends, co-workers, parents etc need to build a trust but those things disrupt and try to have a doubt each other. >>  Dishonesty and lie: I think people who have relationships for example with their parents and co-workers need to establish trust and avoid disrupting it so as not to doubt one another.4. Whoever have must been affected by people to whom have relationship. >> Everyone is affected by the people who surround them. So, the most important thing is what kind of people you will meet. >> So the most important thing is the kind of person you will meet. If you have a good frineds, you maybe resemble their personality, behavior and thought. >>  If you have good friends, you perhaps resemble their personality, behavior and way of thinking. But if you have in opposit friends, you will be resemble them. We have a proverb related to situation. He who touches pitch shll be defiled therewith. >> But if you have the opposite, you will also resemble them, We have a proverb related to this, \" He who touches pitch shall be defiled therewith.\"

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