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2012-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hello^^ A presant Wather! 1. She wasn't very rich. Although She gave money to the beggar. 2. He left early.So that He wanted to arrive on time. 3. You can go out tonight. You must tell us where you are going. (provided) It is, I don't using provided, I'm sorry 4. Even if I don't earn a big salary. But if I did, I wouldn't buy a car. 5. In case Take a sandwich. There might be no restaurant. Good bye^^

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Hello!Thank you for doing your homework.Please go over the corrections.Thank you!T.Camille^^Hello^^ >> CorrectA presant Wather!>> Hello! What a pleasant weather!1. She wasn\'t very rich. Although She gave money to the beggar. >>Although she wasn\'t very rich, she gave money to the beggar. 2. He left early.So that He wanted to arrive on time. >> He left early so that he would arrive on time.3. You can go out tonight. You must tell us where you are going. (provided) >> You can go out tonight provided you tell us where you are going.It is, I don\'t using provided, I\'m sorry >> I did not use the word provided. I\'m sorry.4. Even if I don\'t earn a big salary. But if I did, I wouldn\'t buy a car. >> Even if I earned a big salary I wouldn\'t buy a car. 5. In case Take a sandwich. There might be no restaurant. >> Take a sandwich in case there\'s no restaurant.Good bye^^>> Correct

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