Homework#22
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HW#22 Sentence Construction: Use these words in your own sentences.
1. cultivate
2. refine
3. vulgar
4. obscure
5. ambiguous
It is difficult for me to make sentences.. So, what I\'m writing now is just a make-up
My friend cultivates sugarcane to refine sugar in their house. He does a lot of strange things and use the vulgar words.
And he is always late whenever we make an appointment and he mumble some reason for being late.
If I argue with someone else, I want him on my side.but he always has ambiguous attitude between me and someone.
So, I don\'t know I keep relationship with him.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
Here are my correction.
My friend cultivates sugarcane to refine sugar in their house. He does a lot of strange things and use the vulgar words.
>>My friend cultivates sugarcane and refines it in their house. He does a lot of strange things and use vulgar words.
And he is always late whenever we make an appointment and he mumble some reason for being late.
>>And he is always late whenever we make an appointment and he mumbles some reason for being late.
If I argue with someone else, I want him on my side.but he always has ambiguous attitude between me and someone.
>>If I argue with someone else, I want him on my side. But he always has an ambiguous attitude towards me and someone.
So, I don\'t know I keep relationship with him.
>>So, I don\'t know if I keep relationship with him.
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