HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
1.the other 2.the others 3.others 4.another 5.another
Currently, my goal in life is to marry a man.
I think the ambition is a way to reach a goal.
In five years, I want to marry a man and to have a sweet home with a baby.
I would open my own my class, so I would earn a lot of money and opportunities.
In order to obtain the goals, I should fall in love a nice guy and study English more.
Time,money and my age hinder me from achieving my goals.
강사 첨삭
Others may not find the person of their choice and they prefer to wait for the appropriate person to [이름]t. But if you keep on believing that you will find the right person for you Winnie. It will happen just always believe. Some people consider this as their true love.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections:
1.the other
>> There were three books on my table. One is here. Where are the others ?
2.the others
>> Some of the speakers went straight to the conference room. The other speakers are still [이름]ging around.
3.others
>> Correct
4.another
>> Correct
5.another>> CorrectCurrently, my goal in life is to marry a man.>> CorrectI think the ambition is a way to reach a goal.>> CorrectIn five years, I want to marry a man and to have a sweet home with a baby.>> In five years, I want to marry a man and have a sweet home with our baby.I would open my own my class, so I would earn a lot of money and opportunities.>> I would open my own class, so I would earn a lot of money and receive opportunities.In order to obtain the goals, I should fall in love a nice guy and study English more.>> In order to obtain the goals, I should fall in love with a nice guy and study English more.Time,money and my age hinder me from achieving my goals.
>> Correct
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