homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, My teacher^^
I'm Your student!
Today, I'm vary busyㅜㅜ
So I not tries to telepone call you.
I have good week.
Because, I perceive the truth. Time is vary important.
I try to using the 24hours like to 48hours.
Please Your are good command ^^
Good Bye ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi my baby, good evening!
We didn\'t have class today so I missed you again..T.T
I hope I can hear your voice again tomorrow..
Anyway, here are the modifications I made for you..
Take care always and have a good night..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello, My teacher^^
>>Hello my teacher,I\'m Your student!
>>I\'m your student.Today, I\'m vary busyㅜㅜ
>>Today I\'m very busy.So I not tries to telepone call you.>>So I wasnt able to have class with you.I have good week.
>>I have a good week.Because, I perceive the truth. Time is vary important.
>>correct
>>But you have to observe the proper SPELLING of the word VERY.I try to using the 24hours like to 48hours.>>I work for 48 hours instead of 24.Please Your are good command ^^
>>Please do help me with your good command.Good Bye ^^
>>correct
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