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2012-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, My teacher^^ I'm Your student! Today, I'm vary busyㅜㅜ So I not tries to telepone call you. I have good week. Because, I perceive the truth. Time is vary important. I try to using the 24hours like to 48hours. Please Your are good command ^^ Good Bye ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi my baby, good evening! We didn\'t have class today so I missed you again..T.T I hope I can hear your voice again tomorrow.. Anyway, here are the modifications I made for you.. Take care always and have a good night.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hello, My teacher^^ >>Hello my teacher,I\'m Your student! >>I\'m your student.Today, I\'m vary busyㅜㅜ >>Today I\'m very busy.So I not tries to telepone call you.>>So I wasnt able to have class with you.I have good week. >>I have a good week.Because, I perceive the truth. Time is vary important. >>correct >>But you have to observe the proper SPELLING of the word VERY.I try to using the 24hours like to 48hours.>>I work for 48 hours instead of 24.Please Your are good command ^^ >>Please do help me with your good command.Good Bye ^^ >>correct

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